Love Poem

Like an empty bottle,

has your heart ever been shattered

on dry ground?

Has it ever licked its wounds and found

nothing relieves the festering, not even

the watering of your tears?

Have you ever cried,

finding yourself lost in a sad song, feeling prayers

going over your head and not having the desire

to reach up and take them to yourself?

Do you measure your sadness by the depth you have loved?

Broken bottle on the ground,

now as dust under my feet

it is there, but I have walked away,

knowing the cuts run deep.

In memory of someone I once loved who many died years ago. Aren’t memories like that, they come up inside of you, taking your hand and wanting to talk.

Photo: French antique double wine bottle carrier, a safe way to carry two bottles of wine.



Comments

30 responses to “Love Poem”

  1. Cindy Albright

    Simply beautiful. Your writing is touching….your photos are breathtaking. I want to pack my bags and leave for the South of France right now.

  2. The image of the two bottles… very poignant.
    Quote from gracie.. written after a young friend died:
    “Achievement is measured by the depth to which the lives of others have been touched.”

  3. Corey, Your words cut deep and tender.
    The wine bottle carrier is wonderful. I wonder how many happy reunions that carried the wine to.

  4. “…measure your sadness by the depth you have loved?…” Profoundly simple and yet we forget so quickly. I adore certain smells for this same reason, they bring up all those old feelings, and remind me that although the departed is no longer here, the memories never leave…

  5. I love the way you personalize your memories as wanting to take your hand and talk. How true.

  6. feeling prayers
    going over your head and not having the desire
    to reach up and take them to yourself?
    The words that flow from your heart and unfold before me make me gasp and shake my head in wonderment at the gift you have…

  7. You hit a soft spot with this picture…You’ve no idea how many times I’ve wanted to buy one of these bottle carriers..Oh and the message hits the bull’s eye too..

  8. Once again, you’ve posted something I can relate to so easily.
    I’ll be away for 2 weeks…won’t be on the internet. I’ll comment when I get back 🙂

  9. beautiful poem Corey…love the wine carrier !

  10. I have a special memory garden where I can sit and reflect on
    loved ones I once held in my arms and now I hold in my heart forever.A very profound insightful post.

  11. The idea of the heart licking its wounds is so vulnerable and true. It resonated deeply with me on a personal level. The picture of the wine carrier is so deep when framed with words this way. The heart–the wine…all in need of protection.

  12. You are an artist with words Corey. Your words today were like fingers starting to play on almost forgotten strings in my life.
    Thank you.

  13. Beautiful piece, Corey. These moments are so bittersweet – remembering a loved one, the dearly departed. Your post captures the essence of such emotion perfectly. Well done! Thinking of you, sweet Corey. Thank you for your lovely messages. All is well and will e-mail soon. xo

  14. Yes my heart has been shattered in life and is still very fragile.
    I embrace every moment of love and joy!
    Love you Sugar Plum!

  15. Yes. Yes, love is like that, and memories of it.
    It is always such a wonder to see when someone can pinpoint such an instance, they are often so ethereal.

  16. Oh and how these memories sneak up you when you’re not expecting them…
    what a beautiful tribute…
    i loved it Corey 🙂

  17. Yes, you are right. There are some memories, especially of people we loved who are now gone, that still cut deep. thinking of my father as I write this… I still can’t look at his photographs…
    I really like your photo of the bottles. They would look perfect hanging on my dining room wall!

  18. This was so beautifully written, your feelings shine right through. I’m going through something right now that is breaking, no, shattering my heart. I really needed to read this today. Thank you. ~Beautiful wine holder.

  19. Oh the memories, the memories they shatter you into pieces…

  20. This is so personal for you, but the words you write are true for so many more of us (but we cannot express those thoughts so eloquently).
    The photo with the two wine bottles side by side representing you and your loved one…perfect.

  21. I love this — “Have you ever cried,
    finding yourself lost in a sad song, feeling prayers
    going over your head and not having the desire
    to reach up and take them to yourself?” — lovely.
    🙂

  22. I remember crying so much when my first marriage died. But the measurement was more than the loss of love. It was the loss of innocence. I had discovered disillusionment.

  23. Your words are perfect and are a treasure to read…our family has been dying away and my husband and I have felt their absence deeply…I’d like to sometimes roll back time and take the ache away. I try to focus on the essence of their love and sometimes I can feel their hugs again…hugs to you Corey..

  24. indeed, incredibly lovely!

  25. Yes, yes, exactly like that. Every word. We have both been there, we have felt the bottles shatter and walked on the glass. We are sisters.

  26. this touched me deeply corey.
    the shattering on dry ground like glass …
    you amaze me with your words!

  27. Sending you *hugs* today, broken hearts never mend the same way.

  28. memories do light the corners of my mind, as the song goes…
    simply poignant corey…

  29. corey… these words. the depths, the intensity, the honesty and the painful beauty.
    i read these words, touched and embraced them as i gasped, and then held my breath.
    because there are days like this, that i can find no words, and you captured them, created them in a language i felt i couldn’t speak.
    i adore you. for all that you are.

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