Where the Willows Grow

cousins

 

There are fourteen nieces and nephews in my Amaro side of the family. Seven older ones, and seven little ones. As I was a mother of two of them in the older batch, I was too busy being a mother to be able to relax as I do with the younger ones. Now that my children are young adults, I can kick back and have fun with the little ones in a way that a Grandparent can profit with their grandchildren.

 

Group hug

 

Three of my nieces: Marie, Maci and Gina, plus me.

 

 

 

Sweetie pie cousins

Two of my nieces Molly and Maci, and the youngest in the family four year old Warren.

 

 

 

 

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These are some of my son Sacha's favorite people in the world: his cousins:

Jack, Sam, George, Joe, and Andy.

 

 

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My mother looks as young as her grandchildren doesn't she! Standing in front of her in my Godchild George (named after my father). Andy, the oldest (20) grandson is the TALLEST guy in the family, he is only 6 feet 6 inches.

My niece Patti (on the right) is the oldest (22) grandchild. Patti picked me up at the airport in San Francisco two weeks ago. It was her first time driving to San Fransico by herself. Impressive!

 

 

Marie

 

My niece Marie wrote a short story for her school. I asked her if I could post it to my blog, she agreed.

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"I slouched in my seat, waiting for the teacher to assign partners for the animal science report.

All my friends had already been assigned to their partners. I anticipated another partner I didn’t know

“Let’s see, who we have left, “said the teacher, “Oh yeah, Sari and Bree.”  I slouched even more.

I looked up and saw that she was standing at my desk. Bree was the mysterious no one knew.

 

“You can sit right there,” I said flatly at the seat across from me. She shuffled over to the empty

chair and sat down. Then she started to play with her pencil. 

“Do you have the brainstorm papers?”

I asked.  She replied

“Oh yeah, you get them.” I got up and grabbed two sheets of paper.

I handed her one as the bell was ringing.

 “Okay, so we just write and fill out these fact sheets.

Tomorrow we will create a rough draft.” I Explained to her. She snatched the paper out of my hand and

was out the door.  This was going to be a long week. The next day, I  dreaded sixth period which was

usually my favorite. I had filled out the worksheet, hoping she had too. The day went by so fast, the next

I knew it, it was sixth period.  I walked in, and sat. Soon Bree appeared in the doorway. I faked a smile

But her expression didn’t change. She seated herself  in the same chair.

“ Okay! Now everyone get

In your groups and work on your rough draft!” Said the teacher. 

 

“Did you finish yours?” I asked her.

“Finish what?” She replied. 

“The paper we got yesterday.” I Said back. She shook her head no. I sighed and handed her my paper. She took it and filled her out paper

out. We worked on the rough draft, hardly saying anything. When the period ended, I asked her if

she wanted to come over to work on the report.

 She said, “Yeah, I guess.” We walked to my house

silently.  When we got to my house, I took her into my room and we got out our stuff.  As we talked and

wrote,  the tension and silence had lessened.  We soon finished with the rough draft.  We then moved

on to the presentation poster.  I had  soon realized that Bree actually wasn’t a bad person.  I reread our

rough draft and corrected it after she left.  This project wasn’t going to be so bad after all.  The next

day at school, I talked about our project and how nice Bree was.   My friends stared at me like I was

crazy.

 “You get along with her?” they all asked. 

“Yeah, she’s actually very nice!”  I said back.

 “Okay! I’ll take your word for it!” said one of my friends.  The bell rang and we said goodbye.  I started walking

to  sixth period, our rough draft in hand.  The wind had started to pick up.  All of a sudden, the papers

slipped out of my hand.

 “No!” I yelled.  I ran after it, chasing the packet.  It rolled to the other side of

the street and a car ran over it.  It was too late.  I sulked and walked back to class.  As I walked into the

door  Bree smiled brightly at me.   I walked over and said,

 “The papers, they’re gone!”  I explained

what  happened. 

“Well, let’s rewrite it!” she said.  I got out the brainstorm and we wrote it all over

once again.  

“There, now let’s meet at my house again to type it,”  I told her.  She nodded yes.  After

school we proofread the rough draft and started to type.  Even though we were behind we started

to catch up.  We finally finished our report.  Now we had to practice.  We read it over and over, getting

used to reading it.  During this time we got silly and broke out in laughter several times.  I was really

beginning to enjoy this time with Bree. We decided I would read it, and Bree would present the poster

filled with quick facts and photos.

 “Sari, I think this is going to be a great presentation!” Bree said.

 “I think so too!” I replied while nodding with a big smile.

After Bree went home I practiced reading our report.  I wanted to do a good job for myself as

well as my new friend.

                The next day at school, hoped it would turn out.  When sixth period arrived,

the teacher gave us time to practice. 

“Okay! You guys have five minutes to go over your reports! I hope

you all practiced.”  Me and Bree read our report over,  giving each other a smile of

encouragement.   When the teacher called us up, we read our report with no mistakes!  Bree high fived

me at the end.  I walked back to my desk knowing I had an A plus on my paper.  Even more important I

had a new friend!"

By my niece Marie (12).

 


 

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Where the Willows grow.



Comments

20 responses to “Where the Willows Grow”

  1. Lovely story! Clearly writing well runs in your family!

  2. A sensitive story! Where the willows grow, indeed! Lovely.

  3. Great, great post C, the photos…the one with the old tractor, the one with your niece and the giant chains, molly, maci and warren, your happy face mingled with the kids…they are all spectacular. Your mom does look like a youngster-I think it’s her full heart. It makes her face “read” happiness above all else. That last sentence is a magical ending. Please tell Marie that her writing is excellent! Technically perfect (at her age that is remarkable) and such a timely topic. She should submit it to American Girl mag and get her first byline.

  4. Lovely niece. Great insight. Well done.

  5. Good looks and excellent writing skills must be afamily traits.

  6. Great job Marie! Blessings, Kimberly

  7. Oh Corey,
    What a beautiful family. How the willows have grown. I remember the photos of them when they were much younger. You can sure see the love in all of them. Thanks for sharing this delightful and so true story. Great insight for such a young writer.

  8. Brenda L. from TN.

    Great job, Marie! And you made a new friend to boot! What a partnership! An experience you both won’t forget!

  9. You have such a lovely family, the photos are amazing. It was a pleasure discovering your blog :)>

  10. Lovely photos and lovely family.

  11. Loved the story! Loved also seeing your nieces and nephews. It brought back memories of growing up with many cousins around me. What fun memories they all will have. How lovely that you have been able to be there at this time of year.

  12. love Willows…love the Amaro’s.

  13. Amazing young writer! We need more of these deep insights into the possibilities of getting to know “the other”.
    Can’t keep myself from green envy for such a large and connected family! 🙂 Many blessings!

  14. Cousin Chris

    1. Good things always come from those named Marie Amaro
    2.Warren…….Human Wreaking Ball. I love it when Zane brings him to the Barn on Friday Nights. He will come up to me and, with teeth clinched, Growl. Grrrrrrrrrrr!

  15. Lovely story, Marie. Do you think you might expand your story for submission to a publication? I hunger for more details: exactly HOW did Sari and Bree do their collaboration — i.e., what was the topic of their animal science class project, who contributed what information, who read which parts aloud during the presentation, etc., etc.? Tell us more!

  16. Wonderful to have such a big happy family. I have but a few cousins left, far away all of them. You are certainly blessed!

  17. Please thank Marie for sharing– that is a great story that carries a very important message about judgment vs. understanding. Now she is a published author!
    Your family is heartwarming, always.

  18. Loved Marie’s story….such empathy…she’ll grow up fine and anyone would be proud to be her friend. Lucky Auntie you are. Tell her thanks for sharing it with us.

  19. Thank you Marie for sharing What a wonderful short story. I would have liked you as my friend years ago.

  20. What a beautifully written story. That Amaro insight and talent is alive and well in Marie, too.
    I agree with others who encourage her to submit it for publication.

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