would you recognize me?

Poem photo corey amaro

 

If I allow myself to feel

Leaves will fall from the trees

the wind would brush them from the ground

out of reach for me to catch, too far from my sight to see

the river would swell  

loosen the rocky soil

Uprooted I would fall in and glide to the sea

Sea salt tears 

tangled white wave hair

Burnt skin I would wash ashore

Amongst the sea glass would you recognize me?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



Comments

4 responses to “would you recognize me?”

  1. It’s frustrating coping with matters over which we have little or no control. This is especially such a time.

  2. Your words deeply touch us all.
    Blessings, love and prayers for us all

  3. I may be too literal…poetry is elusive- yet I can feel this prose- I would like to think I would recognize you because although physical traits characteristics are changed with time life and health SOULS recognize each other– those that have walked the same path even if only for a while and even if across the miles never having met- a connection we can not see but forged made with shared experiences emotional exchange secrets shared or reading a blog post from the same author for well over 10 years or more – sharing what cannot be seen with the eyes I would like to think I would recognize you or anyone I have shared life with…..

  4. The train station scene in the movie Reds…
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X5MtATxkyHM

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